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Open Poetry #46
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2010-07-19 10:23 AM

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As fireflies rise
Above the reeds—
One last robin


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easy1
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1 posted 2010-07-19 03:32 PM

An enjoyed read, and a nicely painted picture. Perhaps the robin seeks an after-rain worm, as fireflies are distasteful and somewhat toxic to birds.
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