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Open Poetry #46

Stay a little longer

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

0 posted 2010-07-18 11:26 PM

She stared at him
With her small wrists
Like little olive branches
Brazing the wind.

His eyes calmly sat,
Sifting through the paper,
August at his back,
She leaned over
And smelled the back of his neck

His breathes gently paced
Crossing his legs as he turned the page,
Her oval mouth against his skin
Her slight cough, a winters grin

She reached for his hand,
Like the gallop of the night
Sitting so still,

They fell into each other,
Until their lips stayed, just a little longer.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2010-07-19 12:00 PM

very cool write

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2010-07-19 01:50 PM

some very nice lines here...
I enjoyed.

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2010-07-20 11:36 PM

Thanks, all. Take care

Tomer

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2010-07-26 12:02 PM

more please...

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