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Open Poetry #46

Musím Musíte (I must, You must)

martiniat8
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since 2003-06-21

Posts 897
Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic

0 posted 2010-06-02 09:24 PM

Sometimes I think she won't ever leave him
Sometimes I think she already has

What is the difference?
when you're the last person she talks to before bed
the first one she wants to speak to in the morning

Where the heart goes, the body and soul must follow?

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2010-06-03 01:16 PM

no, I don't believe that is the case with most

good write I can relate to

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2010-06-08 07:43 PM

Enjoyed...James

Eterne
Member

since 2010-07-21

Posts 75
Quebec, Canada

3 posted 2010-07-25 09:59 PM

"Where the heart goes, the body and soul must follow?"

Yeah, good question... One would suppose, but I don't think that's always the case, since many people like their lives complicated :-)

Nice poem, sweet, short and to the point.

katahdin
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since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

4 posted 2010-07-25 10:31 PM

Nice!
Kat >^..^<

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

5 posted 2010-07-26 12:03 PM

love those first two lines
nice tight poem

easy1
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since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

6 posted 2010-07-26 06:52 AM

A good read.

"Some we would not choose, but we're not always free." - Neil Peart

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