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Dadygoose
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since 2010-01-01
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A Communist country

0 posted 2010-07-23 12:12 PM


Red because red is the color of Desire
Okay, it’s bee two years,
And I’m still waiting.

I demand a hug.

I demand a hug, right now.

I am very, very demanding!

(So, like Romantic heart says)

come over here, right now!

Stop what you're doing

and just come over here, right now,

or I'll go over there and just TAKE you.

I want a big, full body hug.

I want you to hug me real close and real tight.

I want to be close to you in spirit,

because bodies can just get in the way, you know.

I demand a hug.

I am very, very demanding.

Please don't make me come get you ...

I demand a hug,

and it has to be with you, right now!

Please? ... ... ... ...

Please? ... .... ...

Please? ... ... ...

Inspired by a sunny day

WITH you.

Hey, nobody's human!

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
1 posted 2010-07-23 12:23 PM


fantastic!
Eldest
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since 2010-06-15
Posts 177
Alabama
2 posted 2010-07-23 12:34 PM


love it, just add the n to been
katahdin
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since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.
3 posted 2010-07-24 10:05 PM


Nice! I want a hug too!
Kat >^..^<

Loveandlaughter
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since 2010-07-24
Posts 13

4 posted 2010-07-24 11:13 PM


agree with everything this poem says. funny, but recently i stopped being friends with somebody because they didnt hug me as i was leaving..yes i take my hugs rather seriously and enjoyed this greatly
Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03
Posts 903

5 posted 2010-07-26 08:48 AM


SweetDaddy! A day with out a hug is like a day without sunshine! EBM
Eldest
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since 2010-06-15
Posts 177
Alabama
6 posted 2010-07-26 10:22 AM


Now I need to find someone to give ME a hug.
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