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rockaustin New Member
since 2010-07-16
Posts 5 |
Rebuild You let your years go by Playing the same game you'd never win You were so stubborn, you had so much pride. Look at yourself, you have just died. You stood like a brick wall Letting everything crash into you Not a single chip, not a single crack You asked, you received, you never gave back But finally you've fallen Fallen victim to a gentle breeze You crumbled, torn down out of nowhere Feeling dead inside you spend your days in prayer It's time to rebuild from the ground up It's time to become stronger Pick up every brick and lay them across the ridge This time you will build a bridge |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Wonderful! ~Amaryllis |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
A very effective portrait ending with a universal truth. You have a lot to say and you know how to say it. Well done. |
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