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A Beautiful Disaster Member
since 2007-01-13
Posts 409 |
The cradle of despair. The ever-winter air. Is anybody there, Beneath this dreadful moon Evoking thirst for tears? I'm screaming - no one hears. I breathe the same old fear That I'll be dying soon. My soul strays and hovers, My heart is under covers, My lonely secret lovers - The clouds and the sea - Can grant me no salvation Within my heart's temptation. In this dilapidation I see no way to flee. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
This strikes a chord. At least you are writing artistically, and that is good. Loneliness sucks. There must be some good way to meet good people locally and be at least somewhat happier... |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
Deep pain very well expressed. I like your rhyme scheme. Good work. |
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