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Open Poetry #46
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easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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0 posted 2010-07-17 10:26 PM


The Deer Hiker

River, bog trail, gnats:
Moss upon shadow-cleft rocks,
Deer closer than men.

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Amaryllis
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1 posted 2010-07-17 10:28 PM

Wonderful, easy1.. I am right there with the hiker  
~Amaryllis
Bastet
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since 2010-05-07
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2 posted 2010-07-18 04:38 AM

A snapshot, clear and precise, of the scene you're seeing. Exactly what haiku should be.
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