How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Sanctuary Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives

A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #46 » My Favorite Flavor
Open Poetry #46
Post A Reply Post New Topic My Favorite Flavor Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Lamar Cole
Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274
0 posted 2010-07-13 06:48 PM

Cherry Coke tastes sweet.
Mountain Dew is so neat.
But darling, you're my favorite flavor.
The one I always savor.

Sweet as a strawberry soda.
Fresh as lemonade.
Smooth like Mello Yello.
Makes me glad I'm your fellow.

Drinking nice and slow.
Satisfies my thirst.
Every part is sweet to the taste.
Not one drop goes to waste.
© Copyright 2010 Lamar Cole - All Rights Reserved
easy1
Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209
Southeastern USA
1 posted 2010-07-15 01:28 PM

A very neat write.... and I could really go for a cool diet soda about now, wonder why?
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2010-07-18 10:26 AM

sweet write
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #46 » My Favorite Flavor

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary