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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2010-07-15 10:44 AM

maybe it was those dune day seductions
when you brought cherries and lipstick
and blushed at the voyeur who lingered

or the distant sighs of urgent tides
pressing into coves willing writhes
as if they were imitating our dancing

or those under the oak tree waterings
when you spoke of consuming sensations
and ruined the dry climate with saliva

leaving kiss texture gratification there
on the listening seams of my attention
before you called me such sexy names

unintentional and improper and quite often

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daark

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

1 posted 2010-07-15 12:33 PM

Very neatly composed... considering the subject. Great imagery here, and I can almost imagine the blurted names.

At least she saved them for you, and not for the beach-wandering old man with a camera, etc.

A good read---appreciated.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2010-07-15 01:26 PM

thanks ez1...

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2010-07-15 11:52 PM

D ~

I do like how you write it and I do like how I see it.

A

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2010-07-16 05:49 AM

ms ali-san, thanks babe

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2010-07-16 04:17 PM

Last line was the lovely bow...

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2010-07-16 05:29 PM

ms sun..thanks babe

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

7 posted 2010-07-26 09:26 AM

You wet the imagination then wring out every delicious drop-EBM

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2010-07-26 10:55 AM

"leaving kiss texture gratification there
on the listening seams of my attention"

very nice.......

always a lesson when I read your offerings

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

9 posted 2010-07-26 03:10 PM

ms ebm..thanks lady

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cpat, thank amigomyster..

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

10 posted 2010-07-26 07:20 PM

I like your style.
Kat >^..^<

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

11 posted 2010-07-27 06:04 AM

ms Kat..thanks so much

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

12 posted 2010-08-10 10:32 PM

I love that line `ruined the dry climax with saliva. I guess I shouldn`t ruin this comment by saying too much - `Great`.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2010-08-10 10:55 PM

maybe it was those dune day seductions
when you brought cherries and lipstick
and blushed at the voyeur who lingered
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Maybe it was!!!

Hot dayummmmmmm!!!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

14 posted 2010-08-11 05:48 AM

EB..thanks amigo

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babyblue..glad you found it babe..thanks

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