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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xRDHixhbu0g&feature=related * * * Here to you my daughter titch remember that you called me this: a drunken bit of uselessnes: and I won't be around. You my son is more the same-- you won't even claim your name... optioned individual you're drained like some residual eight year old that fried a cat in a microwave... I'm never going to know the truth we're never going to be the same as we lose all that we had you shield your eyes against the sun blinding bright to dazzling dancing dizzy being young caustic hating everything by whims and whistles and the grunge of waking in absurdity. * * I'll miss the teddy bears. * * * |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Excellent write. I can't access the youtube on this rig, but the words here are very well-composed, and sadly too often true. "How sharper than a serpent's tooth it is To have a thankless child." Sometimes I believe that Freud's three phases of gratification development correspond to the three hardest trainings almost everybody goes through, and the adolescent hormonal one is the most difficult. Well, despite what David Bowie may have sung, Mark Twain assures us they/we will grow up and out of it. So, Best wishes, and please excuse the mini-rant. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Methinks that mine was the mini-rant;yours was so much more lucid. I would have been gone five years ago but I don't know how to pack. Thanks for readying me...easy.  |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Excellent writing, as always.. wrenching subject.. I hold out hope that the unconditional within wins out in the end Best~Amaryllis |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I guess in some things I am lucky...wonder why my children still speak to me since I still get drunk and fall off my horse  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
cute read |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Dixie? What in the sam hell are ya doin' on a HORSE? My kids drive me to drink. *sorry* sheesh..I sound a bit like a female toerag or somethin'... It's Sunday. I think I'm gonna get me some religion so I can get a day of rest. Thanks for reading, all.  |
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