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Open Poetry #46

Living Rough

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2010-06-18 10:15 PM

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trash fire shedding heat

bag wrapping absolution

karma briefly sleeps

©2010 by icebox

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2010-06-18 10:35 PM

life started burning
raw kindle under pressure
leaving all in ash

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

2 posted 2010-06-21 07:35 PM

Brief sleep can suffice
when unjustly imprisoned
at Lefortovo.
Alex Dolgun found this out---
survived the Gulag to write.

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Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2010-06-21 07:42 PM

There is a rock band called absolution muse...I haven't heard them play, but know I'm ok, anyway. Don't wake up your karma, there is more peace, without it.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2010-06-22 10:39 AM

always more in your words than just a glance reveals....even in such short form as this..

enjoyed sir.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2010-06-22 11:11 AM

I have one of those fires too

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2010-06-22 10:59 PM

Thank you all.

There are times when, in retrospect, I realize life and all it broken edges.

I try, but fail at putting this into words.

I awoke with this written on a scrap.

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2010-07-19 04:21 AM

I think you put it all into words extremely well, Charley.
Ida

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