Open Poetry #46 |
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Words Of Goodbye |
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tattooedsweetheart07 Member
since 2010-07-11
Posts 86Pa |
Your words of goodbye, Hit my heart like a cannon ball hitting a ship My tears flow down my face, Like a mad furious river My heart broken heart, Is sinking like a ship in my tears My hopes and dreams, Are drowning like the people on a sinking boat My mind, Is filling up with all the memories of us When will this madness stop Why are you doing this to me When will I ever know? The madness will never stop, The thoughts of you doing this to me will never end And me ever knowing will never be told When will I love you again? When will you be mine again? When will I be happy? Me loving you again will never stop, You being mine will come again, And I'll never be happy with out you in my life |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
A good composition - I like the sinking ship analogy and the play on "ever" and "never", too. May the author find happiness, perhaps even mutual happiness. |
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