Open Poetry #46 |
Singing Lullabies |
Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
the moose come out sometimes at dawn i coo my song softly maybe they listen maybe not i don’t really know we share a window eye to eye, staring until one of us tires - Alison |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
Beautifully captured. I really liked this. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
oh hell ali-san your singing makes the moose drool...that is a beer ya know...or an ale anyway..kewl stuff lil one |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I always like to say, 'meese'. Enjoyed your song Alison. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
sweet song gal.....until we tire |
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Dadygoose Member
since 2010-01-01
Posts 162A Communist country |
Ali. This makes me think I should have turned out to be a moose instead of a goose. That way I could hear you. But, can gooses turn into mooses, and mooses turn into gooses? It’s gonna hit 90 today so I’ll have to pick up plenty of ass. That’s how we say ice down in Texas. For example: Would you lack some ass tea that’s tea with ass in it? Oops I forgot … we were talking about … mooses? … or was it … gooses? … or was it .,.. … See how frightfully busy I am these days? Anyway I may write something on pip about the Texan lingo. Lack I like when you top stuff on your computer, or rot stuff in your computer. So leaves with a big small (that’s a smile, a big small) :--------) Well anyway, I gotta get going. J Hey, nobody's human! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, Zach. I am glad that you liked this one. It was just what I saw out my window early the other morning. A - Daark One, Is that beer??? Really? Wow, I am gonna bottle it and make lots $$$. Thanks for your eyes, man. Ali-san - Hey, CG! Thank you. A - Hey Toe, You'd tire fast if you heard me sing! Thank you. A - Jaime, Thank you for reading my little poem. I do enjoy your rambles. A |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I adored. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, dear dahlink. It is good to see you here again. A |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
I love this, especially since we have moose roaming all over our yard and northern NH!!!
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Alison - yes, they do listen... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Alison, I love the poem that raises the idea of communication in a general way, may be ironically moose listen better that some people...Thanks for the beautiful poem. regards yann |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I'll bet they listen...and learn. Ida |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Alison, I bet your lovely singing was, moooosic to his ears... This was sweet dear. Richard xx |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
No being is indifferent to a song I believe, and when there is love in it as there is in yours most assuredly it is a gift of warmth. Love this much, dear Alison. Hugs. M |
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