Open Poetry #46 |
Bones and Flowers |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones and his Gwendolyn don’t care that much for flowers. They don’t have a place to grow them anyhow. They have their small yard, back behind their rowhouse tastefully done in concrete. They have all the flowers they need, when they look in the eyes of their children. Bobby |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Oh that is sweet.. like this much! But oh, I always feel as if I didn`t get the memo.. =(.. who is `Bones`.. I am sorry to be so clueless Best~Amaryllis |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Amaryllis, Bones is a grown-up, retired, young male prostitute. Love Bobby/Bones |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Amaryllis, For the smiley faces. Love Bobby |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Bobby - Seems as if Bones has matured somewhat but there's still so much more to see in the eyes of his children. Maybe he will see ... himself? Helen |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
They have all the flowers they need, when they look in the eyes of their children. Indeed this is the most precious divine gift, dear Bobby. Flowers are another miracle of creation, but I do understand your considerations ... when one compares ... Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Helen, For reading and commenting. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, For your kind understanding of the situation. Love Bobby |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Children are like roses... a beautiful bloom with a wonderful scent. But there are times when they can really stick it to ya. I wouldn't trade mine in for the world... but there are times I would like to send them to different corners of it. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Andrew, Of my four children, one lives in Japan, one in California, one in Florida, and one in New York City. So we have the world fairly well covered. Bobby |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This was sweet. Children are proof that God has not given up upon the world. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Earl, I'm pleased that you liked the poem. Children are indeed a blessing. We have a lot of them here in the hood. Bobby |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
Yo, bobby I'm not much for flowers either. i like this. Joe |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Joe, I'm pleased that you agree with Bones, and that you enjoyed the poem. Bones/Bobby |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Nice line about the children's eyes. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
This is Excellent Bobby, a wonderful touch of your heart. have a great day. yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Lamar, I'm pleased that you enjoyed that line. Thanks for your kindness. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, For the kind words. I'm pleased that the poem worked for you. Bobby |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Bobby Bones is so lucky to have children because they are the greatest gift that God has bestowed upon us, most times anyway. Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Lindsay, I agree with you 100%, and so does Bones. Bobby |
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