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Open Poetry #46

sensations

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2010-06-12 04:41 AM

The walking moon
teasing my face,
I write sky verses
to cuddle L.A,
cursing the highway
I spit some gas
like a drunk devil
to meet deep girls,
driving away
from bar to bar
I recognize a melody
from the forties
and tap the lights
to avoid loneliness,
nightmares are free,
where are people ?
the world can’t say it,
neither the drunk clouds,
look at the stars
my only friend,
clutching fluids
the walking moon
teasing my face.

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (06-12-2010 06:36 AM).]

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

1 posted 2010-06-12 09:23 AM

Very thought invoking.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2010-06-12 04:42 PM

quote:
my only friend,
clutching fluids
the walking moon
teasing my face.

Amazing, dear Yann, how you worded your sensations.

Love,
Margherita

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