Open Poetry #46 |
Universe vibrates (haiku) |
Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
* * * Universe vibrates with infinite energy: pure divine concert * * * |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Ahh.. a divine concert indeed! What a treat to see & read this today.. thanks for sharing it! I am so fascinated by the cosmos. =) ~Amaryllis |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
The cosmic blender stars spinning round and round God's perfect cocktail "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I had never thought of the cosmos as a divine concert until now. Wouldn`t it be wonderful to know some of its secrets? |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Really really nice 5-7-5 Haiku, Margherita! All sound is vibrations rhythms and God is the universe's tuning fork. Jeff [This message has been edited by threadbear (06-02-2010 01:39 AM).] |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Very nice Haiku...complemented by the picture..ww |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Perect picture and poem...I agree with Jeff! |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
A lovely haiku, and a lovely pic (I believe that is what we call the Andromeda Galaxy, "near" neighbor to the Milky Way). |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I love that Margy, the thought of the whole entirety, vibrating, pulsating, tightening up, and then glowing. Beautiful my friend! Richard xx |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Very well done! However, the image confuses me. Is it a galaxy or a neuron? hmmm.... inspiration strikes: Magnificent sight! The only active neuron In Toe's cranium. Well, that was harsh, there might be some more laying around in there, too. What? This is a galaxy? |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I love everything about this, Margherita. Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How not to be fascinated by the immensity of Cosmos, dear Amaryllis, it is overwhelming and for our human brain not easily conceivable in its vastness! Thank you so much for your loving reply. Dear Andrew, that's a beautiful haiku. I am happy that you felt inspired to write it! Thank you so much. Some of its secrets we do know, but still so very few in comparison to what's there to know and understand! Thank you, dear Earl, for your kind reply. Thank you, dear Jeff, for enjoying my thoughts and for the compliments. Physicists try to explain everything in terms of science, but there are things that lie far beyond in the spiritual sphere, I have no doubts about this. I stand in awe and wonder! Dear Walter, thank you for your kind comment. Dear ARH, how nice that you came in here and with such a loving reply. Thank you! Dear Easy1, yes you are right, that is the Andromeda galaxy, totally awesome isn't it?! Thank you for the kind reply. Thank you so much, dear Richy, for the glowing reply. The Universe no doubt can take our breath away with its splendor. Dear John, you make me smile! It's the Andromeda Galaxy in all of its magnificence and you know what ... I believe we are all, Toe included , magnificent expressions of the divine creativity. I knew, dear Ida, that you would like this. Thank you so much for confirming it to me. I think we would gladly spend our time studying and gazing at the stars, you and me, if the earthly things would not distract us so much. Love and joy and divine awareness to all. Margherita |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very Nice. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
My dear Margherita, a stunning picture with words to match. I hope this goes through as I tried several times to submit a response for your great poem---Dancing in High Heels but it wouldn't register. love and best wishes. Lindsay |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
A beautiful and perfect haiku. Don't know what more I can say. Bravo! |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Yippee! Loved this dear poetess! A great Haiku!
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Lamar, for the read and kind comment. Dear Lindsay, I appreciate your efforts, thank you so much for the most loving reply! Thank you, dear Bastet, I love this form and it's nice to hear that you enjoyed it. Dear Marti, hugs to you for your joyous reply! I always appreciate and love your haikus too. Love, Margherita |
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