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Open Poetry #46

In My Final Dreams

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2010-05-01 10:08 PM

In My Final Dreams

"I was in her arms thinking I
belonged there."...Abba

So why has so much time passed
without a fulfillment of my final dreams?

Only she knows what she was thinking
each time she was within my arms.

Sharing those experiences with her
I do have some ideas concerning her thoughts.

If I love her and she loves me,
what can stop us from being together?

Well, in this relationship, time and distance
have been a formidable foe.

In a relationship of many years ago, a woman
I cared for passed away just one day after the
day we were attempting to reunite.

In a Chinese fortune cooking was this
message, "Your dreams will come true."
Unfortunately there was no date assigned...

Still I do know that 2010 is a year of settling,
for I have declared it to be so,
and she will either melt into my arms
or have no other choice then to move on.

JamesLee
30April
2010

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2010-06-06 07:04 AM

Sad happenings as premises, but the dream has just Now to manifest! May she melt within your arms, dear James.

Lovely longing.

Love,
Margherita

Kethry D
Member

since 2010-04-12

Posts 64
Australia

2 posted 2010-06-06 08:20 AM

When decision rests on the crumbling hope of a fortune cookie it is always excellent to read the outcome of wandering hope.

A poet must leave traces of his passing not proof.

Rene Char

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

3 posted 2010-06-06 11:28 AM

Rich emotion, well-expressed.I hope your dreams do come true this time.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2010-06-06 12:31 PM

Yo James,

This poem works very well.

I'm sure things will turn out good for you.

Bobby

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

5 posted 2010-06-06 12:57 PM

But beware the fortune cookie who found fun instead of you...

A good read.

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