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Open Poetry #46

Flowers of The Equinox

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2010-05-31 11:08 AM

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Let the world
Go to Hell for an hour

Let talk and thought of talk
Stand outside in the failing light

All that matters to our hope of flight
Is this lambent moment of desire

Shadows flicker on pictured walls
Perhaps a dreaming ghost or two
Once afire as we are now
Haunts this mist in humid air

Nothing consoles us in our end
Save the joy of pleasures
Remembering

The moon ascends
As the sun goes down
In a not so distance
The night bird calls

This is weird you say
As you shed your clothes
Casting them on the floor

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Misty Lilacs
Senior Member

since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

1 posted 2010-05-31 03:22 PM

Terrific write. Very romantic.

ooxx Marti

"I am using this cane as a fashion statement. It's the newest trend in accessories."

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

2 posted 2010-06-01 12:08 PM

"Nothing consoles us in our end
Save the joy of pleasures
Remembering"

now isn't that the damn truth

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2010-06-01 01:54 PM

perfect words, a very enjoyable read.

regards

yann

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

4 posted 2010-06-01 01:59 PM

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Thanks everyone
Glad you like it

John

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Amaryllis
Senior Member

since 2010-05-20

Posts 1306
Mi now

5 posted 2010-06-01 02:10 PM

Yes, I must agree with the others.. quite dreamy/woozy and wonderful! Great read

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