Open Poetry #46 |
A Soldier Never Cries |
Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
A Soldier Never Cries My gun was aimed upon his chest My eyes fixed on his face My heart was open to his heart And held him in embrace My grief engraving moments in a frozen time and place I meant to say I’m sorry He saw it in my eyes He seemed to say I understand And a soldier never lies And I disspelled the notion that “a soldier never cries” He went to lift his gun at me, But he was out of time His life was just about to end Before this gun of mine And in his face a portrait of a family filled my mind And I could just imagine When I come home from Iraq A hero’s welcome in my town A firm pat on the back But I would give my life if I could only bring him back They say that all is fair in war, But war’s a travesty It was not fair that he should die And I, still walking free Still burying my soul in shame, my heart in misery Now many years have passed And time can heal a grieving heart But I have never left that soldier From the very start We are the best of friends for we have never been apart Elizabeth Santos |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
In those tremendous moments when it's either you or me probably there is not even the time to ponder, but afterwards a sensitive heart will always relive the scene and never forget. You put this into very poignant words, dear Elizabeth. If only nobody in the world should ever again cope with such situations! Love and peace. Margherita |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
War, in all its horror, reflects all of human experience. Well written. |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Wonderful writing, Elizabeth. Perhaps no one ever forgets their personal hero. and that's a good thing! Jeff |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh my! |
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