Open Poetry #46 |
The "I love you" |
Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
So when the “I love you” breaks free there’s no earthquake or upheaval of what has always been but it’s like the air is cleaner and the sky celebrates the advent of honesty. It dances on the spot like a gypsy dressed in blue and swirls the clouds round about its own form of happiness far above my lowly understanding. The sun not prone to ever leave trembles within the confines of its own fiery passion and shines approval down like an adoring parent onto a new born babe. The “I love you”, you see, overrides the state of man and births over and over again the new and wondrous ~ and who could ask for more except the you and me who labour under need to freely join the party with feet on the ground. And feet on the ground? Oh, merely the bars and walls that imprison word and deed until the end of time! Helen / 30 May 2010 |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Take off those feet from the ground and drift in happiness upon the cloud of love! Dear Helen, this is one of your best really. Love, Margherita |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thanks, Margherita. I used to take my feet of the ground but landing again became too much to handle and so ... I'm here until I'm not. Love Helen |
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