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Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

0 posted 2010-05-26 02:05 PM

The fool’s journey continues...

The hanged man walks away
in my shoes

I trip tender footed
down my unbroken path
distracted with wonder
at the fool in me

I began to wander
getting lost
somewhere deep
inside of me

A fascinating facet
I find myself
capable of
so much pleasure
and immeasurable pain

I let curiosity
have its way
with me

I have a habit
of not thinking
when I'm feeling
my way along
blind spots

I get carried away
on new found wings
flying too fast
too high
to consider
consequences
of crashing

EBM © 5/10

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

1 posted 2010-05-26 02:22 PM

ebm..sounds like you are thinking your way through in this...usually the wisest avenue they say, thought not as much fun..enjoyed it ms

Brooks M
Junior Member

since 2010-05-26

Posts 19
California

2 posted 2010-05-26 03:15 PM

I like this very much....Reminds me of myself.

Brooks M

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

3 posted 2010-05-27 09:50 AM

I have a habit of thinking too much. Which is why I choose to feel, and to fly as free as I need to be.

Great thoughtful poem ebm.

whisperingwalt
Member

since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

4 posted 2010-05-27 10:14 AM

"I have a habit
of not thinking
when I'm feeling
my way along
blind spots"

EBM, Great stanza!..I can relate this poem...good read.ww

Earl Brinkman
Senior Member

since 2010-03-03

Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan

5 posted 2010-05-30 08:37 AM

What an interesting way to begin a poem - the hanged man walks away in my shoes. The other line that caught my fancy was `I have a habit of not thinking when I`m feeling.`

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

6 posted 2010-05-30 05:11 PM

I enjoy your writing Eusta, Keep 'em coming.
Ida

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

7 posted 2010-06-07 03:14 PM

DS Thanks for the read ~ebm
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Brooks Glad you can relate ~ebm
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CG Glad you liked it ~ebm
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Walt Glad the stanza grabbed you and thanks for letting me know ~ebm
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EB Thanks for the feedback ~ebm
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IDA Thanks,I'm glad you want more, I'll do my best ~ebm

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