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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2010-04-30 12:59 PM

Adrift
on the bayou
of lonliness
something stirs me ahead
Is it love?
Or just oil...

MARK V SHELDON
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

1 posted 2010-04-30 01:39 PM

Maybe it's a school of dolphins cajoling you to be happy with them...?

Good to be among friends once more...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how:
http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml

whisperingwalt
Member

since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

2 posted 2010-04-30 05:40 PM

Nice poem..thoughtful...longing...hopeful
Few words but lots of feeling imagery..walt

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2010-04-30 05:40 PM

lovely to see you again Sandra.

And hopefully you don't get swamped in oil...if you live near the spill.

M

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2010-04-30 09:44 PM

We know oil is headed your way...hope love is also...James

Klassy Lassy
Member Elite

since 2005-06-28

Posts 2187
Oregon

5 posted 2010-04-30 10:16 PM

If oil, I hope it is the oil of gladness. The inflections here tug at my heart for all the dreams and detours...and spills.

Karen

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2010-05-03 12:31 PM

ms kat...the residue of one and the saliva of another...nice to see you back..

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2010-06-06 06:58 AM

May it be love ... this hurts because of the loneliness and the oil (!), but hope is there too.

I love your works and I am happy that you came back here to share them.

Love,
Margherita

easy1
Senior Member

since 2010-05-22

Posts 1209
Southeastern USA

8 posted 2010-06-06 01:47 PM

Hopefully that specific love will be found soon, and the more hurtful vandalisms avoided. Sometimes one cannot help but to have a few tarball-like memories wash up, though.

Lamar Cole
Member

since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

9 posted 2010-06-06 02:55 PM

The last line is very thought provoking.

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

10 posted 2010-06-07 01:34 PM

Hi Sandra! I am so glad to see you again. I have been thinking about you.

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