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martiniat8 Senior Member
since 2003-06-21
Posts 897Prague, Bohemia, Czech Republic |
Surrounded by boxes and just... mess so just want to throw my sox in my bag and just go... start this journey, months in the planning to come down to a few days throwing the plan out the window left with some ideas on where to go what to see hearing the train whistle outside my window taking weeks to find the "perfect" room going with... location location location all these destinations are cold but, oh oh the German receptionist... "Yah Yah, Mitte Smit" "See jou on dee 22nd" mmmmm just ready to... go [This message has been edited by martiniat8 (01-16-2010 05:08 AM).] |
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Kielo Senior Member
since 2002-02-11
Posts 1109 |
I like the way you've broken out this piece, "and just go..." One word lines are not used often enough, I think. They carry so much weight. Love this poem.  |
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