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jewel of westfalia |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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perhaps it is the gingerbread of mornings when you bring a yellow basket with smiles and leave nonchalant over easy greetings like a tip at the ritz when dressed in casual or maybe the jewel of julie jeans seduction as you glance back over the shoulder a westfalia of imaginary trails to hike in the barefoot of tennis shoes with heels and you just leave my mind there at the brim wondering how wandering your conversations would be penned in some latin chanting song more musical then worldly whisper worded or how your fingers would feel in leather as you slipped behind me an occasions of freedom to gallop a gypsy wind highway northward just for some day or two residue of momentary when imagination made us of the same ceramic _______________ daark |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
and you just leave my mind there at the brim wondering how wandering your conversations would be penned in some latin chanting song more musical then worldly whisper worded ~*~ My daily sip of sigh.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...thanks lady friend... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Oh my, what else can one do but sigh? Word art is your domain Sir! A lingering pleasure for any reader. Love, Margherita |
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Bastet Member
since 2010-05-07
Posts 246 |
"gingerbread mornings," "yellow basket of smiles," "world whisper worded" = beautiful imagery and good use of alliteration. And the poem hangs together. A very enjoyable read. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..thanks sweet lady.. ________________ bas...thanks for the read.. |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
"when imagination made us of the same ceramic" That line flows like the open road and the whole poem just makes a body want to find a bike and go~ ebm |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
EBM....thanks for the read...actually was watching some old VW vans heading to route 66.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
and you just leave my mind there at the brim ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Uh huh, uh huh! Love that imagination of yours, especially when it goes into overdrive!! Lovin' your title and all the little tidbits! |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Really enjoyed this read..you have creative and vivid way of writing...very well done..ww |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hello DS, beautiful words indeed, I know that westfalia is a VW brand and a region of germany...However your words made me travel somewhere sometime....Thanks for the graceful poem. yann |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
baby blue....thanks special lady!! ___________ ww, thanks amigo ______________ yann..it is the vw van I am speaking of...many of them in use along the coast here in California...explorer types use them as their method of catching dreams...thanks for the read |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You make me want to ride and whisper nothing secrets into your ear. Alisan |
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