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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Lucky Stars Late at night when you are sleeping I ponder my good fortune And thank the stars above That you’ve stuck around I hear your breathe And I feel undeserving You never gave up When you had every right I pushed you away But you believed in me Your love brought me back I thank the stars above... ...late at night when you are sleeping. |
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VelvetVampress Junior Member
since 2010-04-24
Posts 26 |
i do the same thing lol.... i like the poem btw ~Velvet Vampress~ |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Redeeming Love! What a wonderful gift and blessing! A Hymn says, "Redeeeming love has been my theme and shall be till I die." You have voiced well your theme and message-- your perpetual gratitude for such come out loud and clear--even as voiced in the still of the night! Very Good! David I thank the LORD everyday |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Deleeme, Thank you for your kind feedback. Gratitude is what can change our hearts. Thanks |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
My first thought was if that is what you are thinkin' at night, I bet you have a geat way of saying Good Morning! ebm |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
OH ebm behave yourself! LOL...WW |
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Lamar Cole Member
since 2009-05-01
Posts 274 |
Very lovely. |
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