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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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I can read you like a book My fingers pouring over your lines Reading every feel of your surface And imprinting you there within my mind Seeing you only by touch Feeling all you have to teach Wanting to dive in to your story As my fingers deftly beseech I see you as a flame in the dark Blind to all else in the world without There is calm within this storm I translate the words from finger to mouth If only you could feel my steady hand Moving swiftly, naked and savage To the tune of this garden in delight Your words leave me all but ravaged You express more than thought in this way To me, when I caress with fingers for eyes You always leave a long lasting feeling That like words, I can mentally visualize |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Ooh, hot stuff CG! |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Thank you very much, eb. Glad someone thinks so. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Always enjoy your writing, Chalmette Guy. Ida |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
A most excellent piece of writing.  "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow! love this! I wish that a good man would start reading me like Braille lol I especially loved the last 2 stanzas. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Aham....this is very touching...  seriously.  |
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whisperingwalt Member
since 2010-04-29
Posts 240Coquitlam, BC, Canada |
Very descriptive and well written..good job. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
every word felt...by the reader...extremely profound...and turned on the smiles, for the long road home... enjoyed a lot! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
LOVED IT~~~~ My favorite of yours, filled with passion, yet tender with soft emotion! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ahhh...to be read like a book in braille...makes of fiction, real. Nicely done. |
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