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Open Poetry #46

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

0 posted 2010-05-07 03:28 AM

We are not going to ask the truth
from people who talk every day.

Trees open their heart silently.

from dawn to the following one
the sun changed.

Bastet
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since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

1 posted 2010-05-07 04:16 AM

There is a wonderful haiku-like feeling to this poem. Very few words but a big truth conveyed to the reader. Great imagery with the tree and the dawn.

Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

2 posted 2010-05-07 08:00 AM

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Very good Yann

John

PS

Read it again.
With your consent would like to add it to my Word file of poems by others. Again very good.

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2010-05-07 11:51 AM

There is so much beauty in your wise and wonderful message here.

Nice writing, islander~

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2010-05-07 01:38 PM

Yann,

I lie constantly. It pays.

Bobby

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2010-05-08 09:39 AM

thanks Bastet for your wonderful comment, appreciate it.

regards

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2010-05-08 09:41 AM

Yes John,you can don it, I am honored by your words,

regards

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2010-05-08 09:42 AM

Thanks BS for your kind and supportive comment;

yann

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2010-05-08 09:43 AM

Thanks Bobby, now I know a little more about you.

have a nice day

yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2010-05-11 02:22 AM

You are wise, yann. While people say a lot about nothing. Nature just is.
Ida

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