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Open Poetry #46

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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2010-05-10 03:58 PM

thy poetry was but pottery without piety
without that shimmering sheen shrug
of baked on candy coating callous

never before the aforementionablly noted
it was but the lingering fingering digit
dialing knots from oughts and noughts

occasionally without occasion of occurance
that strum thrummed on rum rubbed drums
by mandible voices of man double in choices

to speak his wit and wag his welcome wheels
or to wheel his welcome beyond that wag of wit
into monotone ocean of slower motion lotion

harshly bedraggled but hearthruggedly bedded

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daark (scribblenote..expressed while holding some of my recent poetry exericses up to a blank wall for reflective purposes.)

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

1 posted 2010-05-10 04:15 PM

kewel stuff Dark Dude! ebm

nebulous_nymph
Junior Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 37
Inertia

2 posted 2010-05-10 05:22 PM

this charms my childheart....
makes me want to call you for a playdate

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2010-05-10 10:17 PM

These sounds sing solemn...

smiling.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2010-05-11 06:10 AM

ms ebm...thanks ms

_______

saint mary...well I think you should too?

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ms sun...thanks lady friend

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