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Open Poetry #46

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Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2010-05-10 01:27 PM

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You had
A bad dream
She said

Oh
How do you know
I said

She then said
What I said
In a dream

It was
Very accurate

Of course
What she said
I said
In a dream
Was itself a dream

So a dream
Referred to a dream

That much
I remember

.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2010-05-10 04:30 PM

Yo John,

I got a kick out of this well written poem.

Bobby

whisperingwalt
Member

since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

2 posted 2010-05-10 11:45 PM

Very creative...liked the read..well done.

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

3 posted 2010-05-10 11:59 PM

Huan Yi - I try not to talk in my sleep unless I've rehearsed my words over and over.LOL. This was witty and humorous and it cracked me up. Much enjoyed. Namyh

[This message has been edited by Namyh (05-11-2010 12:18 AM).]

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