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Open Poetry #46

Satyr and Nymph

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

0 posted 2010-05-06 11:44 AM

Satyr and Nymph
Steal away
With lechery and treachery
A summer’s day
Frolicking in the breezes
One who teases
One who pleases
Their pleasing places
They hide and seek
In the shadows
Sporting their lusty graces
In the forgotten garden
Their tenders harden
In the exquisiteness
Of coming bliss

Bastet
Member

since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

1 posted 2010-05-07 03:59 AM

A really delightful poem! I can just see the two prancing in the woods. Just the type of rhythm you need for this subject. Bravo!

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

2 posted 2010-05-07 08:20 AM

B- thanks for the looksee! glad you liked it! ~ebm

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2010-08-25 01:18 PM

this gave me a chuckle....
because it seems quite playful in a way, with a couple of underlying layers one might peel back and say are a bit cynical...or dissallusioned perhaps..

in any event, I've been known to read more into the words than was ever the intent...
and I enjoyed

Eusta B. Mae
Senior Member

since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

4 posted 2010-08-25 01:30 PM

Very perceptive sir, you peeked under the layers properly. ebm

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