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Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

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0 posted 2010-05-05 10:48 AM

What fate
Brought me to
Your space
To clasp you into my lace
Caressing your essence
Into my own
My hesitations
Fall away
Like stone

[This message has been edited by Eusta B. Mae (05-05-2010 11:39 AM).]

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

1 posted 2010-05-05 11:28 AM

Oh man, I love this.

"Caressing your essence" that's an amazing phrase.

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

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2 posted 2010-05-05 11:40 AM

thanks CG!-ebm

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2010-05-11 08:59 PM

Enjoyed...James

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

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4 posted 2010-05-12 11:26 AM

Thanks for letting me know James! ebm

Dadygoose
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since 2010-01-01

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A Communist country

5 posted 2010-05-12 10:47 PM

aSome day I’ll have to tell you the story of Midnitesun who, though she has passed away, lives on and on in my heart.
I am getting sleepier and sleeper and loosing the ability to type so I better go lest I fall oujt of the chair.

Hey, nobody's human!

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

6 posted 2010-05-12 11:06 PM

Yo dear EBM,

This sounds like another good idea.

Love Bobby

Bastet
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since 2010-05-07

Posts 246

7 posted 2010-05-13 02:10 AM

Lovely poem. Concise yet eloquent. Great internal rhyme and alliteration. And thank you for your comments on my work.

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

8 posted 2010-05-13 08:56 AM

Dadygoose-becareful, wouldn't want it said you fell for me (out of the chair LOL) I would love to hear about her. I have read her work,I know she was special. ebm

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

9 posted 2010-05-13 09:00 AM

Bastet- thanks for the technical critique makes me feel like you are reading my lines and not just between them. Much appreciated!-ebm

Bobby darlin' I think you're gettin' ideas. ebm

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

10 posted 2010-05-13 09:34 AM

Good question to start with, good luck with the answer though? LOL...perhaps only the heart knows the answer to that one.
The essence of one that knows true and real love is a gem to be treasured....thank you..

Goldenrose.

Friendship is Love without his wings. Lord Byron.

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

11 posted 2010-05-13 09:48 AM

Goldenrose- Thanks for the thoughtful response! ebm

srizah
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 34
India

12 posted 2010-05-13 01:22 PM

Wonderfully imagined

Live Life!

whisperingwalt
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since 2010-04-29

Posts 240
Coquitlam, BC, Canada

13 posted 2010-05-13 01:34 PM

ebm,
Your ability to say much with few words is awesome...you have a romantic soul that yearns to share that romance with us..well done. ww

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

14 posted 2010-05-18 10:03 PM

Eusta B. Mae - first writing of yours I've had the pleasure to read. I love the words "Caressing Your Essence" also...

BC

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

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15 posted 2010-05-19 02:52 PM

srizah-thanks ebm
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walt, you sweet wisperer you! thanks!ebm
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Bill- Thanks for checking me out! ebm

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

16 posted 2010-08-30 11:21 AM

There is a danger always... in reading through a poets works and thinking they see connections from one to the other...
but, I do believe all things are connected in some way, and one consistant thing I see in your words is a brevity that condenses possible moments into gems for those who read...

the human brain is hard wired it seems to look for and recognize patterns even if none exist... take the famous picture of the face on Mars for example... we form shadow and light into images or patterns we recognize. This piece in some ways seems to recognize that a normal pattern is broken, yet filled with something more...a want?? a desire?? an event?? or just a thought...

enjoyed.... and sorry to ramble on... I sometimes think I see links between what others write and larger questions I have asked myself many times....
always I suppose... looking for patterns

Eusta B. Mae
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since 2010-05-03

Posts 903

17 posted 2010-08-30 11:39 AM

Cpat- your intuitions are so good...I try to condense thoughts, desires etc. sometimes it is a little more like taking lemons and making hard lemonade. (LOL) ebm

rosepetals36
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18 posted 2010-08-30 02:50 PM

I liked

Eusta B. Mae
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19 posted 2010-08-31 01:28 PM

rosepetals36- thanks!

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