Open Poetry #46 |
Does She Know? |
irmirt Junior Member
since 2010-06-09
Posts 18 |
I saw her face, her eyes met mine Her smile I'd ne'er forget . I heard her speak, some facts to know, Our friendship's on the vine? Each morn I wondered what it would take, to bring that smile to life. Would it be a tease that light her face, and help her worries to erase? A happy world I'd offer her, let's say goodbye to strife. One day I found her fighting tears, my heart sank to an end. Attempts to comfort bounced back to me, no smile, the sorrowed stare, As I walked away I cried inside, I failed her as a friend. For friends indeed are the friends in need, her pain she would not share. A special place within her heart, I wanted to be there... But soon I'd see her heart was closed, no matter how I'd care. I tried and tried to kindle coals, an ember is all I need; Was friendship growing cold, I asked, what happened to the seed? Like water held within a hand, her friendship turning gray, Embrace the one I could not hold, I wanted her to know; I spoke to her the meaning still, the words I had to say. Admiration, the seed of love that needs some words to grow. Remembering, I think of how a dream could visit and be real; Talking, sharing, smiling, I've nothing but a sigh. Our world's have drifted, I wish not, her smile plays well within my heart; I cannot live the past again, yet miss her, yes, I feel. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When we do not dare to speak, there will always be regrets. Does she know? Maybe not ... and isn't it a pity? You have written this very well. Welcome to Pip. Looking forward to more from you and to see you around. Love, Margherita |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Tell her Welcome to Passions. |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
[This message has been edited by Ron (08-31-2010 11:02 PM).] |
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Sunkissed Senior Member
since 2002-12-03
Posts 610 |
Irmirt, a truly touching write about love lost. You never know, life may bring her back to you. ~Sunkissed |
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