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The lines |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Then unto the anguished there came a sense of peace but I know it can be shattered by misaligned perceptions created by a human mind. And that mind forward marches the soul into despair when the lines between the real/unreal are frail and delicate. I layer them; I do sometimes when love is fulsome, free with thread upon each thread of unbreakable resolve to enact upon the ground the true intent of soul. It’s the strengthening of lines that finally will hold in place all wayward human minds and ‘tis the chore of those who love to act as surrogates for those too well immersed in the times of their lives. But until, yes, until the agony of those who love is put aside and nullified they’re useless aids and helpers in the strengthening process ~ and so I wake today a woman only now equipped to weave the threads myself! Helen / 5 May 2010 [This message has been edited by Honeybunch (05-05-2010 05:31 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poem is wonderful, I especially like the strength and conviction in this verse. Nicely done, Helen~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ It�s the strengthening of lines that finally will hold in place all wayward human minds and �tis the chore of those who love to act as surrogates for those too well immersed in the times of their lives. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
misperceptions are the reasons why we should hold our hearts in communication so so good to see you again Luv Lee J. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Bluesy and LeeJ! You have both been greatly missed here. Thank you for visiting and maybe soon you'll put your feet up here again??? Helen |
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