Open Poetry #46 |
Job's Fear |
XOx Uriah xOX Senior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 1403Virginia |
A cooling wind blew down from Calvary, where Jesus hung upon a stick, painted red with blood and those in Hell sought to catch a breeze I caught a glimpse of Hell Once, as a child, within a dream Somber faces in a dreary place Tortured, due to sin Now, wishing to depend on Jesus for salvation from their sufferings Release from the heat I awoke and found myself sitting upon a church pew in a dreary place, filled with somber faces Preacher lecturing, shouting, torturing, due to sin All around me were fans in the hands of those depending upon Jesus for salvation from their suffering Release from the heat A cooling wind from where Jesus hung upon a paint stick *** |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a Baptist preacher shouted at me once and I never went back a fine man when not in the middle of a sermon |
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Joe Houck Member
since 2001-04-23
Posts 324california |
another great piece of writing. i love the form you use as well in your poems. I semi stole its type of form in my last poem. imitation is the highest form of flattery, right? Keep flying to the sun with these gargoyle wings. Joe Houck |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
I do recall from my youth that an uaairconditioned church can be an uncomfortabkle sit when it's the late service on a hot Sunday morning. |
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