Open Poetry #46 |
Just Wonderin' |
Abe Senior Member
since 2003-05-28
Posts 694Looks like Vero Beach, FL until the end! |
Just Wonderin' Just wonderin', what I said Or maybe, what I shouldn't have Just wonderin', what I did Or maybe, what, I could have. Just wonderin', what you want And if I couldhave given Just wonderin', why I felt Once more, I'd started livin'. Just wonderin' what it's like To hold youin my arms Just wonderin', but I know I've not seen all your charms. Just wonderin', if you believe But, can't blame you if you don't Just wonderin', if some feelings end When I know, that mine won't. Just wonderin', (but, not reallly!) What I saw there, in you Just wonderin', why there aren't more Who do things, like you do. Just wonderin', if anyway We can be, at least, good friends Just wonderin', if I'll find, just one Before, my journey, ends? Del "Abe" Jones Mankind's greatest accomplishment is not the revolution of technology, it is the evolution of creativity. copyright 1984 |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Abe, Thank you for sharing your wonderin' poem with us. It's a poignant piece of writing and touched me. A |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Very soft, I enjoy reading all you write, latearrival |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
Mental meanderings of the heart. Yes. It is a little sad in the wondering. ~Karen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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