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MorningStar Member
since 2009-10-26
Posts 290Pittsburgh, Pa 
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I won't play this game with you Catch and release Cat and mouse Taunt and tease... but never actually follow through No I won't play today Tempt and turn back Lure and keep away Bait then hook... then cast out for something new No winks, no smiles No hook, line or sinker But it's not what you think if it's: "This Cat's no fun" I simply can't today... Because I'm having my claws done But be patient and wait a merry chase is guaranteed come this way again and I might give you what you seek I could even make it a date... a play date ----------- Someone called me a tease today and for a moment almost got upset. But then I thought again - and wrote this. I let him read it, and he laughed and said "I told you so". Then I laughed. And we were laughing together...but I still won't go out with him ;0) If I don't say it...who will? |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
I loved the last line of this stanza: "But it's not what you think if it's: "This Cat's no fun" I simply can't today... Because I'm having my claws done" |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
games are no fun and you deserve more  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear MorningStar, It’s always best to keep those scratching, lacerating, and grasping claws in good condition. I like the way this poem is written. Love Bobby |
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