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Open Poetry #46

Music Beautiful Gone In Seconds

Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15

Posts 96

0 posted 2010-04-22 06:16 PM

I listen to it, alone - sea violets, on wet sun- all night long;

I listen to the wantings, around a river - boys can't stand it;

Moments - leaves droop - growing old-chuckle - I always reply;

I love the pebbles - thin - sea oxygen - all over;

Of course - shedding darkness - cutting - in - free time;

Like ready - shallow river - tears, end - a novel;

My kind of music - weary, migrate-off, hours, flee - music -

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Mysteria

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

1 posted 2010-04-22 06:55 PM

I love the tune of off hours myself.

Lamar Cole
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since 2009-05-01

Posts 274

2 posted 2010-04-23 03:12 AM

Very Magical.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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3 posted 2010-04-23 10:20 AM

nicely done!

Laverne Pacquire
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since 2009-11-15

Posts 96

4 posted 2010-04-23 05:43 PM

Thank you for your comments Shadow,mysteria, and L. Cole

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

5 posted 2010-04-23 10:07 PM

Yo dear Laverne,

This is an interesting stream of consciousness poem.

Love Bobby

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