Open Poetry #46 |
Bones In Nagasaki |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones is in Nagasaki ship yard, with a Saudi Arabian client. Bones is consulting on some chemical reactors being constructed in Nagasaki for his client. Bones and his Saudi client are sitting across a conference table, across from two of their Japanese hosts. Saudi Arabians being wonderfully honest and straight forward, Bones client got right to the point. “Where did they drop the bomb?” After an extended pregnant silence, one of the Japanese hosts raised his arm, and pointed in one direction, while the other host pointed in another direction. Bones, being a “they” immediately changed the subject back to the construction of chemical reactors. Bones likes to work in Japan, as he gets to visit some of his family. Bobby |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
The destruction in Hiroshima and Nagasaki was horrific. I hope Mr. Obama`s dream of a nuclear free world comes true. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Earl, For reading and commenting. Bobby |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I'm up on my history, so I understand the duplicity of their responses... but I'm a little lost on the last two sets of lines. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Andrew, Well lets see. "Last two sets of lines." Please explain the size of the sets you're talking about. As far as I know, a set can be any number. What don't you understand. Bones has family in Japan. I'm puzzled. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (04-22-2010 12:32 PM).] |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I actually figured it out... it just took some time and an altering of my perspective... "they" is anybody not Japanees... and Bones is enough "Japanees" to know how the culture works... he has family there. |
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N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet Member
since 2009-07-30
Posts 360New Orleans |
I was born in Okinawa Japan, though of having no Japanese decent I always did find myself more drawn to the devastation then others. Too many had to die simply because we wanted to prove a point. |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
Alwaysn an interesting read. I like how you use these poems as a story. -Juju |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Andrew, For caring. You're close. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks N|D|N|C|Lost-Poet, For reading and commenting. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Juju, For the kind words. That's the way I write all my books. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...when I was in Japan we took a class trip to Hiroshima...to be there is to awaken emotions...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks James, For your kind words. I'm pleased you liked the poem. Bobby |
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Trapped - Nothing Member
since 2010-04-25
Posts 52 |
Does your book have pictures? I would love to buy some, and pass it on to my children! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Trapped - Nothing, No, I'm sorry, but none of my book have pictures. Love Bobby |
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