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Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2010-04-27 11:07 PM

Nothing

No cleansing tears
no laughter bliss,
no soothing touch
no kindred kiss.
In peace, release
I cannot find,
no rippled pond
to still my mind.

Another day
and nothing more
my bones, they break
upon the shore.
No pistol raping flesh of head
there is no point, my love is dead.

By Melissa Long-Monette

For Tony...

Trapped - Nothing
Member

since 2010-04-25

Posts 52

1 posted 2010-04-27 11:12 PM

No cleansing tears
no laughter bliss,
no soothing touch
no kindred kiss.
In peace, release
I cannot find,
no rippled pond
to still my mind.
These are words of a true poetic professional. One who has written many books. The professionalism is seeping from your words. I appreciate like you wouldn't image. You inspire me, like the pros do.

Trapped - Nothing
Member

since 2010-04-25

Posts 52

2 posted 2010-04-27 11:13 PM

You inspire like a big old hard rock.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2010-04-27 11:24 PM

Trapped - Nothing:
You obviously have nothing better to do with your time than to harass the good poets here on pip.
I don't care if you mock my poems and I am usually slow to anger and very forgiving, but I am appalled by your belittling of Sunshine, Balladeer, Chalmette Guy, Robert Jordan, Marchmadness and many others here! They are talented poets, show them the respect they deserve please!

Sure, it's real 'special' to have a simpleton like you read poetry here......you inspire me with the depth of a glass of water.

[This message has been edited by Honeybee (04-28-2010 10:42 AM).]

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

4 posted 2010-04-28 12:45 PM

Hey, and I really enjoyed this one Melissa.

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

5 posted 2010-04-28 08:50 AM

Honeybee...this is good. Don't give any attention to that Trapped Nothing punk, I assume he's a stupid, bored teenager. Just ignore him.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2010-04-28 12:17 PM

enjoyed it ms bee

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