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The Unknown |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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 Magic night whispers upon the moor, misty blankets of enchanting fog, roll over in silent motion, like ghost of the night, Erie sounds off in a distant, like tiny spiders, my skin, begins to crawl, slowly, as a deer, I move, Something moves out from, the corner of my eye, shadows of black, disappear, fading, The long, dark walk home, through the black woods, of the unknown, await me, as I tremble, Walking silently, slowly, eyes are watching me, limbs of trees are breaking, the golden moon guides me, Stopping, I take a deep breath, gaze around me in curiousness, who is there? I ask myself, as if someone is following me, Quickly I look around, and see, my shadow, onward I go, pressing onward, to the unknown.  Will my words stick like glue to your heart? it is the paste that keeps us together~ [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (04-21-2010 05:13 AM).] |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
A magical and mysterious write here. I like the suspense you created. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very mysterious, one of my favourites of yours. I believe this one is going into my treasure chest of poetic gems.  ARCTIC WIND |
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Laverne Pacquire Member
since 2009-11-15
Posts 96 |
The picture is beautiful. the poem, I get the impression that someone is being haunted in this poem. The poem has an eerie feeling to it. There is a feeling of being stalked. beautiful words take care |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
...and so we press on despite the view concealed from our eyes... and heart CG |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms heart...I had the red light on and the siren too....but your tunes were so loud in that jag I guess you didn't hear me...that speed bump you ran over was a deer hunter... (grin) |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Fine imagery here. I love suspence. Ida |
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