Open Poetry #46 |
JUST USE ME |
therightside Member
since 2009-12-09
Posts 64USA |
Crush me up or melt me down take me in, just use me. I’ll run through your veins and you'll never forget the Euphoria of being on Me. I’ll etch my initials on each of your thoughts, my vibration will echo inside you. Whispering... Crush me up or melt me down take me in, just use me. I’ll give power to your doubt, and make you doubt your own power; you’ll wish that you never had met me. I'm redemption, not blame Reminder of pain left in the wake, of your careless and reckless abandon. So, you crushed me up, you melted me down You took me in, it was easy. And I hope it was worth your dignity and pride, I'll be leaving and I’m taking them with me. [This message has been edited by therightside (04-20-2010 03:34 PM).] |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice write with a very nice ending...my favorite line was: "I’ll etch my initials on each of your thoughts" ...love how this drew a picture in my mind |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Especially like the last two lines. That's true of a lot of stuff and you nailed it right there. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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OldBuddyOldPal Member
since 2008-12-15
Posts 87 |
And I hope it was worth your dignity and pride, I'll be leaving and I’m taking them with me. BINGO!!!!! |
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