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Fractured Self
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Fractured Self |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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Many pieces of my fractured self Lie like leaves upon the ground And though I place my dreams on the shelf My hopes still keep hanging around It feels too real to realize That life has passed before my eyes The stifling, remorseless grip of life And the timeless mental test Only the sky which has no height Or what used to be my best It took a lifetime of resistance to see My best, again, will never be |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
This is a griping, emotion filled write, which you have written in good style and expressed yourself well! BRAVO!!! David I thank the LORD everyday |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
a poignant, emotive write...nicely done |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
wow, very powerful and poignant. You keep getting better and better and I'll say it again: This is one of your best! |
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