Open Poetry #47 |
My Friend |
sweetcheeks639 Junior Member
since 2011-02-17
Posts 19 |
I started this journey alone and afraid paved by the choices and mistakes that I've made A smile on my face with a heart full of pain desperately trying to keep from going insane Your words encourage me each one brings a smile you say 'it's your own life' and make me feel worthwile I love the way you smile at me and when I hold your hand I know that this was meant to be... a frienship born of chance |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
That's very interesting Laura. A nice way of presenting the idea with a good result. There's always sunshine after rain....Mark Knofler Eric in a relationship the me becomes we. |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Nice write Laura, glad to see you diving in. |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Well worded. |
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