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Open Poetry #47

Kathy

sweetcheeks639
Junior Member

since 2011-02-17

Posts 19

0 posted 2011-02-21 12:30 PM

The pain I felt the day you died stole my breath away
Everyone told me the heartache would heal with each and every day
It's been six years since I've seen your face and the pain still grows inside
Heartache is something that never heals...turns out everyone lied

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2011-02-21 01:13 AM

I don't know that pain like that really heals. I think it abates and returns whenever our memories are jogged. I equate this kind of pain like being a surfer - we just ride the waves when they come powering in.

Thank you for sharing this.
Alison

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

2 posted 2011-02-21 02:14 AM

Welcome to PIP.

Your poem is really sad. I know the kind of pain you speak of here.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

3 posted 2011-02-21 02:53 AM

Been there, done that, felt your pain.
Kat >^..^<

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2011-02-21 02:56 AM

That kind of pain is really hard to deal with. I feel for you.

Eric

in a relationship the me becomes we.

spiked
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

5 posted 2011-02-22 12:19 PM

sometimes writing about a pain or feeling gives us freedom from the thought not being shared, Thanks for sharing
Rich

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