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Tanka..his pillow
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Tanka..his pillow |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada 
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a pillow of parables awaits his slumber next to notebooks he sleeps; whatever is not remembered, has its resting spot --------------- ------------------- ..Copyright 2011 Spiros Zafiris ..channeled; spirit Ram; reaching into the poet's heart ------------------------- |
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katahdin Senior Member
since 2010-07-01
Posts 1196ME. In the Shadow of the Mt. |
Nice one! enjoyed! Kat >^..^< |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Love this one especially. The last two lines say all there is to say, and they say it decisively. ~ Life is sexually transmitted ~ |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..thank you Kat; i'm pleased you like this one.. ..and thank you Jerry; you're very kind too ..>>spiros |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Spiros, my friend, You have a following. Walk well in the sunshine. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Delightful, Spiros. I also have a spare paper in my bedside table for poetry or bits thereof that are born before I sleep or when I awake – but never thought to use it for dreams. Like Jerry, I particularly love the last 2 lines. I have always felt frustrated at the parts of my dreams that I don’t remember – but now I will have the harmony of knowing that they have their resting place. Owl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 Love it. |
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Spiros Zafiris Senior Member
since 2002-10-20
Posts 982Canada |
..Sunshine, Owl, and serenity blaze..please accept my gratitude; pleases me you read and commented..>>spiros |
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