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Open Poetry #47

Her Sounds

Amberzlynnc
Member

since 2010-08-24

Posts 229
New Jersey

0 posted 2011-02-17 11:28 PM

Noise escapes her mouth
Noise escapes her mouth
Lingering are loud and obnoxious sounds
Lingering are loud and obnoxious sounds
Obnoxious noise escapes her mouth
and loud sounds are lingering.

She screams her feelings
She screams her feelings
and yells her excitement
and yells her excitement.
Her excitement, her feelings
she yells and screams.

Sporadic jolts of energy
Sporadic jolts of energy
My ears, pierced by shrieking
My ears, pierced by shrieking
Sporadic shrieking jolts my ears,
pierced by energy.

Sporadic noise she screams
Her jolts are loud and lingering.
Sounds pierced my ears.
Obnoxious screams, she yells
of energy, excitement, and feelings.

*Amber

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2011-02-18 02:36 AM

I really liked this poem. I read it to myself and heard it as an echo.
Kat >^..^<

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

2 posted 2011-02-18 07:03 AM

..certainly works for me

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