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Open Poetry #47

Michael

sweetcheeks639
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since 2011-02-17

Posts 19

0 posted 2011-02-17 07:59 AM

If i'd have looked a little deeper would i have seen the pain hidden deep behind those eyes that never showed the rain?
Would i have known the truth of life that lived deep within your soul?
could i have been the one to help you when you had lost control?
Could taking time to feel with you your heartaches and fears have taken all your pain away and dried your lonely tears?
The answer to all the doubts i have lie within this space...as i stare into the life you lived upon a lifeless face.

Jeffrey Carter

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since 2000-04-08

Posts 2367
State of constant confusion!

1 posted 2011-02-17 08:07 AM

beautiful and poignant! Welcome to Passions! I look forward to reading more of you!

steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

2 posted 2011-02-17 11:49 AM

first, welcome...next, interesting write...that last line makes it for me...good write

SarahJoyScott
Junior Member

since 2011-01-13

Posts 16
Finland

3 posted 2011-02-17 12:21 PM

Reminds me of a friend.
It's beautiful.

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2011-02-17 06:34 PM

Welcome to Passions!

Plesae check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

5 posted 2011-02-17 11:46 PM

Welcome aboard. I enjoyed your poem a lot.

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

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