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Open Poetry #47
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Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
0 posted 2011-01-07 04:32 PM

She bled for hours
Before the storm came
The courage of the town left at bay
The town sovereign for their sins

I took my watch and placed it on her skin
For time was the only thing
I could keep alive along with her body

She was so eloquent in her pale face
Her red lipstick
Like the red droves of dresses
That came rushing to her body

Another life gone,
another one enters
a fresh born baby
just along the townÕs eerie night

A baby,
Her name was Sarah
Sarah with her motherÕs skin.
© Copyright 2011 Tomer Fried - All Rights Reserved
faithmairee
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since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA
1 posted 2011-01-07 04:37 PM

i got chills reading your poem...a sad and nicely penned piece...

There must be a poem in here somewhere.
Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306
Mi now
2 posted 2011-01-07 05:00 PM

Yes, very atmospheric, Tomer! Wow

A
Tomer
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since 2002-06-28
Posts 1168
Michigan
3 posted 2011-01-09 05:45 PM

Appreciate the comments Faith and A...hope all is well

Cheers
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