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threadbear
Senior Member

since 2008-07-10

Posts 817
Indy

0 posted 2011-01-08 02:01 PM

Between

the deeper strings begin their opus
my cuffs are buttoned – my eyes: sealed
Above, tortured clouds cling to their religion
and below
life blinks luminescence in gravity globes.

I am the sandwich

I am the face in the clouds

Jeff Feezle 7/2010

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2011-01-08 02:09 PM

Wonderful work.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· "Look! Crumbs on his jacketses... Heeee took it!"

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2011-01-08 03:18 PM

Way cool!
Lori

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2011-01-08 03:23 PM

Great cloud capture.
Love the ambiguity and wording.

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

4 posted 2011-01-08 04:41 PM

Wow! Jeff...love the photo and the words it brought to you. Makes me want to go outside and look at the sky just to make sure I don't miss anything.

Legacy
Member

since 2011-01-08

Posts 60
Louisiana

5 posted 2011-01-09 05:53 AM

Nice going here. Sometimes when laying flat on my back and staring into the heavens, I get that same kind of feeling.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2011-01-09 12:09 PM

quote:
life blinks luminescence in gravity globes.

Dear Jeff, I enjoyed this much, impressive cloud picture and accompanying thoughts.

Love,
Margherita

faithmairee
Senior Member

since 2011-01-05

Posts 1441
Poe Haven, USA

7 posted 2011-01-09 01:22 PM

this is jaw dropping work here in both the writing and the photo...wow...what more can i say other than i love it!

faith

There must be a poem in here somewhere.

incwrite
Member

since 2010-12-31

Posts 55
new york

8 posted 2011-01-09 01:34 PM

picture, words ..great mixture..works great together

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

9 posted 2011-01-09 06:27 PM

loved this:

"life blinks luminescence in gravity globes"

...after all, who wouldn't love anything with the word 'luminescence' embedded therein

...seriously, great write

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