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the astuteness of doubt
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the astuteness of doubt |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
time-expressed anguish litters the playground of the soul like thought-drops of mental insipidness raining on life’s window sill clouds rage and reverberate with the fugue-fogs of fallacy crushing contemplations under the overload of mental anxiety ambiguity agonizes alacrity, a speed-bump along the parkway of clarity, slowing the processes that define the mind like innate molasses on a cool fall day bursting with energy while free-falling from grace road-side land-minds rip through a tortured, misplaced soul revealing a collusion of conflict from within leaving in preponderance the astuteness of doubt |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Way cool Steaven, I think but I'm not sure. No, seriously, I loved this! Got some fantastic lines in there! Lori |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
This is quite a piece to ponder, Enjoyed. -Trina |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Ya got me. Hell, I'm game. ~ What's The Difference Between Roast Beef And Pea Soup? / Anyone Can Roast Beef. ~ |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Lori, whether or not, I am certain of...appreciating the fact that you took the time to read and comment Trina, may you enjoy the time of pondering...thanks for reading & thank you for finding the time to comment Jerry, not sure I follow you...but I do want to say "Thank you" for spending some time reading and replying |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I enjoyed your poem very much, Steaven and I noticed the alliteration and assonance. Whilst being a thinker and an analyser is extremely rewarding, it certainly has its disadvantages, as you have shown so admirably. However, you have created beauty and sense out of it. Owl |
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faithmairee Senior Member
since 2011-01-05
Posts 1441Poe Haven, USA |
very nicely done, steaven...i enjoyed it much! There must be a poem in here somewhere. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Owl, high praise indeed...it shall not go unnoticed or unappreciated...thank you so very much Faith, always appreciate you dropping by and always look forward to your kind comments....thank you |
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